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Commish: Fiore by MoonMirrors Commish: Fiore by MoonMirrors
A commisioned waist-up for :iconprincess-mia62:

I think I'm finally starting to find a style, I'm certainly becoming a bit quicker ; u ; and it was fun drawing a colored male for once ~ (though I failed quite badly, especially on the hair and pose and arm and asdflashd)
There's also even more I could've said about this piece and it's fails but I'm too tired/busy A `

Character (c) ~princess-mia62
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villainbynecessity Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Student General Artist
:D It's so amazing!!!!!!! Your faces are really improving, and the hair - especially from one year ago (look at this - [link])

I think the pose is fine, but there is something Not Quite Right with the arm. Can't tell what, though ;_;
Is this from the Gaia art shop? You finished it <3

Okay, critique time; the clothing looks stiff. If you look at one section, it looks fine (the folds at least), but then when you look at the whole thing the clothes look baggy.
Your shading could use more contrast, especially around the blue shirt.

...yup! That's about it! It looks really great!
MoonMirrors Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Q A Q Thank you!
Waaah, waaah! Kill it with holy fire! Ohmaigawd, how embarrasing.. I can't believe I drew that abomination only a year ago. What was I thinking (/drawing?) with? adlkfjahsdf A ` Even the artist's comment is kind of embarrasing //hides

That arm's been irritating me as well..
I think it could be partly because of the way the blue shirt-thing falls at the sleeve, and I geuss I could've tried to fix it but just ughurgglrgh
Yup-yup ;u;

Hmm.. hmmmmmm... //looks critically at the folds' unison for the first time// y-you're right OTL
I have to stop rushing drawings, I always make these stupid mistakes I could've avoided by taking my time just looking for them -but, I guess that goes for just about everyone
Really? T-then I'll do that next time! :icondeterminedplz:

:D Thank you ever so much for the critique! It's such a great help getting someone else's point of view~!
villainbynecessity Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Student General Artist
Ahaha I went through my gallery from like a year ago. Oh, the horrors. Oh god. I don't even want to think about them.

I mean, you give me fantastic critiques. >w< I really don't know where I'd be without you.
MoonMirrors Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I'm really glad we've been able to improve so much, though~ Getting to see the fruit of our hard work kind of makes looking at them worth the embarrassment and eye-burning.. kind of

asdf but your critiques are just as fantastic, gurrrrl! This is a symbiosis (or whatever it's called), an equal partnership where both contribute and help each other as much ; u ; I'm also forever grateful for this super cooperation, it's been so incredibly helpful~ :iconbrohugplz:

(sorry for the extremely inconsistent and weird English, btw.. I think I'm going through a phase of knowing and wanting to use too many different words and phrasings and just messing everything up or something asdflksdf)
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