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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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I think the pose is fine, but there is something Not Quite Right with the arm. Can't tell what, though ;_;
Is this from the Gaia art shop? You finished it <3
Okay, critique time; the clothing looks stiff. If you look at one section, it looks fine (the folds at least), but then when you look at the whole thing the clothes look baggy.
Your shading could use more contrast, especially around the blue shirt.
...yup! That's about it! It looks really great!
Waaah, waaah! Kill it with holy fire! Ohmaigawd, how embarrasing.. I can't believe I drew that abomination only a year ago. What was I thinking (/drawing?) with? adlkfjahsdf ´ A ` Even the artist's comment is kind of embarrasing //hides
That arm's been irritating me as well..
I think it could be partly because of the way the blue shirt-thing falls at the sleeve, and I geuss I could've tried to fix it but just ughurgglrgh
Yup-yup ;u;
Hmm.. hmmmmmm... //looks critically at the folds' unison for the first time// y-you're right OTL
I have to stop rushing drawings, I always make these stupid mistakes I could've avoided by taking my time just looking for them -but, I guess that goes for just about everyone
Really? T-then I'll do that next time!
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D Thank you ever so much for the critique! It's such a great help getting someone else's point of view~!I mean, you give me fantastic critiques. >w< I really don't know where I'd be without you.
asdf but your critiques are just as fantastic, gurrrrl! This is a symbiosis (or whatever it's called), an equal partnership where both contribute and help each other as much ; u ; I'm also forever grateful for this super cooperation, it's been so incredibly helpful~
(sorry for the extremely inconsistent and weird English, btw.. I think I'm going through a phase of knowing and wanting to use too many different words and phrasings and just messing everything up or something asdflksdf)