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finaly a background even lol praises , the charackter u nailed the anatomi the cat laying on her leggs is adorable only thing i cud put a finger on is try to use more contrasts in you color variations , if you put a black color layer on topp of your drawing evrything woud be pretty much in the same value [det blir litt grĺtt o.o ]
on the pose i woud have lowerd the char cuting some parts of th grass and try to make a hill behind her in lighter color , making th viwer looking into the picture , puting the shade part on the char from the leafs the tree is missing
ennyways its just minor things realy love your drawing , keep at it your doing great
Thank you! It means a lot to hear that from you ; A ; You're too nice, though > _ <
Oh, yes, that does make sense, I can see it now that you've mentioned it. I guess I just instinctively go for the same values all the time maybe? I've been trying to follow your advice since I read this (I read it about a week after you replied, but I've just been too lazy/busy to reply before. Again, Sorry!)
Those are some great tips about the background ; o ; I'm obviously still very inexperienced with backgrounds, but those tips helped me understand some more. Also, haha, yeah, I absolutely forgot the shade from the three orz
looking forward to see what your currently paintings
still cant seem to finish mine lol even some of em are 2 years in the making lol
gets boring "starts new drawing and dosent finish it"
but cant get passed the fact that i HAVE TO FAKING FINISH THE SHIIT .. before i pop it in the (very emty ) completed folder pfft
just out of curiosity what kind of subjekts do you paint
Moon used Tackle!
It was super effective!
Eh hehe
Anyways, I loooove it! The concept is so nice and well executed~ Plus the sky is so preettyyyyyyy
One thing that I think would make it sooo much better is, if you had more time, to study cat anatomy a bit more. Cats are so hard to draw orz
Also, if you put more detail into the grass, it would be AMAZING
[link] This tutorial's pretty quick, but I think this one is better: [link]
Also - something looks off with the eyes/eyebrows, but I can't quite pinpoint what it is...
Para used Pokémon quote!
It was a critical hit!
Moon is influenced by the quotes! It might use quotes instead of sensible talk!
Ah hehaheh.. ehhe..
YASASHII SUGIRU YOOO
AHAHAHAH. sorry.. I just thought I should do something different from the "thank you"s which have almost become routine...´-`;;
Para used critique!
It was very awesome and helpful!
Moon's art knowledge was permanently raised!
//shot//I know right OTL;; I think that since I've finally become quite confident and quick with my human anatomy I've started applying it too much to every other living being I'm drawing ´A` (if that makes any sense). And I also didn't think it necessary to study cat anatomy.. BIG MISTAKE.
I hope to be able to study all sorts of animal anatomy after I've finished my commissions, though. I have this awesome book on it which I've been looking forward to reading~
Yes, I would sooo have loved to spend more time with the grass. Since I did it last it sadly became the most rushed part. I learned a lot from it and think I can do better next time, though :3 haha I actually used that second tutorial, but maybe you can't see it because I executed it so badly ´ _`;;
Hmm.. true... //studies picture// I think the right eyebrow might be a bit too far down and small ¤-¤;; since I rushed it I didn't really take the time to look for small imbalances like that, but thanks ;v; I hope I can get the time to fix some of these fails sometime.
Thank you, as always, for being such a great criticizer ; 3 ;
Awwwww the thank yous are always appreciated, whatever form they come in.
//so much shot I'm enjoying this too much WHEN WILL IT END
I always assume cats are easy to draw every time I try. Then the cat heads turn out awful, I can't figure out the legs, and the paws make me cry. Then I give up and substitute the cat with a tiny human //shot
ARGH what is this awesome magical book you speak of. I must see it. (I have a magical awesome book too. :3)
Grass is hard. I wish I could say I've seriously tried it before, but I really haven't ;_;
THAT reminds me I found this "30 day Improve your draws" thing on tumblr (no I don't have one though I should really get one because I'm already stalking a zillion people): [link]
...U-uguuu... I'll do it if you do it..... If I have time........
//cries//
//why are my comments getting shorter oh wait it's because I'm getting lazy
also, I totally haven't finished the art trade at all because I decided to make it line-less and painterly and beautiful and akjdf;lkajsdl